Another Homestore Build!

[parrotIy (Parrot)]

I started working on this homestore yesterday / 2 days ago? I forgot when I started. I really loved the outcome of it, and from this build I learned how to actually make a palm tree. Yes, it was a PAIN to search up how to make a palm tree and actually produce it, but in the end it paid off!

Some feedback on this homestore would be amazing. I only used 1/2 free models (Like the try-on feature because I’m a TERRIBLE scripter.) The rest is pure from my work, and I’m proud to say I made this build in ONE day! I’m not sure if that’s something to be proud of but I really like the outcome of what I made in just one day!

I’m also running out of ideas, if you could put some building ideas below that would be AMAZING! Thanks for much for reading, and I hope to see some constructive criticism on this post soon.

Game Link: Homestore - Roblox

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[81001]

The build itself looks good! But, I suggest trying to fix the water going up on the sand it looks a little weird.

[mostwokeperson (TheMostWoke)]

Love the idea of the homestore being on an island ! The build looks great too . I would say a bit more lightning inside … It doesn’t look dark but neither like the sun brightens the place . So yeah , I would say just adjust the lightning a little !

[Gucci_Dabs222 (Euphorian)]

The game is AWESOME! There are some things you should change though.

1. Try making the map a little larger, there’s no space to move around.
2. Try moving the roof up a little higher.
3. Its a little depressing no offense.
   But that’s just my opinion, you can make it stay just how it is.
   Good job!

[ProfessorOfK3ology]

Looks nice, though the texture on the stairs is a bit repetitive:

[parrotIy (Parrot)]

Thanks for the suggestions and feedback! I’ll definitely improve it.

@Gucci_Dabs222 → I’m VERY bad at proportioning sizes but I’ll try to resize it!

@ProfessorOfK3ology → Thanks for reminding me! I was going to put a cover on the stairs but I guess I forgot.

[Gucci_Dabs222 (Euphorian)]

lol.
But your builds are good though.

[dmksa123 (dmk)]

Honestly, the outside of the build could have some more detail to it, other than that, it looks great!

[QuackingDuckQuack (grace)]

Cool. But some issues.

For beginners, the sea seems way too crowded with boats. The palm trees also look a little odd. Maybe bigger leaves would help.

Going into the homestore, it’s dark and crowded! Maybe add some lights and fewer clothes models.

You might also want to add some decoration in the homestore. Flower pots, rugs, or chairs would be nice.

Overall, very nice homestore!

[Coldshot_Dev (Coldshot)]

It looks quite nice, I think the colors are a bit bland though.

[Astro_Plays1234 (TotallyNotAstro)]

This build looks good. However, the walls, the floor and the ceiling need details as they are quite bland. Carpet to floor, wall tiles a nice color combination should do the work.

[parrotIy (Parrot)]

Just updated the Homestore! You’re welcome to visit again for a fresh one, but I’ll list the things I improved below, kinda like a bug fix message!

Improvements

Added an elevator to replace the stairs!
Reduced the number of boats!
Resized the building so its more “bigger” and very spacious now!
Added (one?) more clothing area.
Added a window on the 2nd floor now. There are 3 windows on the 2nd floor.
Added a teleporter that goes from the first floor to the second, and vice versa.

The elevator doesn’t look that nice, but I have no ideas.

If you could give some ideas on what to put in the empty spaces, that’d be amazing! Yes, there is A LOT, and I mean A LOT of extra room now that I’ve extended the building upwards.

[ProfessorOfK3ology]

These aisles here could use floor rugs or something to break up the emptiness. It’d also be a good way to introduce more colour into the build because the only bits of colour are on the walls and ceiling