Right know a lot of the builds look quite unfinished and early in development to request feedback on, I highly recommend finishing certain models “even if your coming back in the groove of things”. I’ll try improving into finishing most of your builds however it may be quite difficult into adding details.
I’d add more detail to the cafe or make it have less parts and more variety of shapes and details, have you consider improving into making more parts detailed and rather basic and simplistic?
The ceilings are basic and flat. This gives the entire place a rather bland design i would work on reducing the undetailed parts. Otherwise there alright models perhaps experiment into putting more time and effort into your builds.
Here, I noticed some positioning problems and the thickness of wall problems.
In the blue circled area, the position is not equal from right and left sides. Try keeping that middle building right in between the main structure.
In the red circled area, notice the thickness difference of the 2 walls? Yes… Make that wall thickness equal.
And the windows are really bright. Try increasing its transparency to simply reduce the brightness of neon blocks.
Thats it from me. I like the style of this building tho.
For the cafe, everything seems a bit blocky and flat. It doesn’t seem to contain enough detail. First, the stairs. The stairs shouldn’t be floating and you probably could add support beams on each of the four corners of each wooden plank to make it look a bit more realistic. I also noticed there is a giant space in front with a fence going around. Unless you plan to do something with it, (such as adding tables, chairs, etc) I don’t think that empty space would be necessary and the building itself should suffice.