Hello, I’m a co-owner of a game, my friend made. It’s a horror game. So please keep that in mind. Please give me feedback on these 2 thumbnails I made, so I can send which one I will send to the creator! 
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interesting … ?
in confused on to what this actually is suppost to be.
my one recommendation is that you turn off universal spotlight so it wont bleed through those thin corners.
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This is suppose to be some art/build for the owner of the game to use. I’m just seeing what appeals to people.
Sorry, what does that mean?
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I would advise that you make the text a bit brighter and the background a bit darker so that the text can be seen clearly.
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But whats the game? You should be more specific for more specific feedback.
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by that i mean, in lighting there is a setting to essentially turn off the “skylight” and in this case, doing so would hopefully fix the issue of light bleeding though the edges, ruining the effect.
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Well, I’m use a light part, not the sky. So I’m not sure what to do about the bleeding.
Not sure I like that, the font seems like it’s enforcing itself to be creepy… if that makes sense.
Something like a VCR OSD font would look nice or a sans serif font.
Well, the game is horror genre. Do you mean it’s too creepy, or that I’m trying to hard on the creepy scale?
It seems like it’s trying to scream “I’M A CREEPY GAME HELLO”, I think something more subtle would be nice 
Hmm. What would seem more better, deleting some ‘help us’ or something?
Well, if the background is a bit brighter, the secret will be revealed. (The game isn’t out yet). Also, which one, or both?
You don’t need to delete anything
Just try messing around with different fonts.
Hmm, so different fonts for each ‘help’ or different font for all of them?
Your choice, it’s just feedback. You don’t have to apply this.
You should say that in the actual post so people know what they’re looking at.
Hi there, my suggestion is to make the words twice as large, maybe even more, as they are hard to read, maybe try putting one big one in the middle and smaller ones around it. If you are using photoshop make the white outerglows or strokes 100%, and just lose that gradient on all words, and change some of the grammar to ‘What have you been hiding?’ or ‘What are you hiding?’ and ‘Why am I here?’, and on the words with red outlines change the text to white… see if that works. Hope this helps
The red outlines is what gives a ‘blood’ effect or just evil effect per say. For the size, what would you recommend?