Hello! Hope you are well. I would like some feedback on this butcher shop that I have built. It’s just a normal butcher shop however there is a storyline that there has been a war, hence the broken tank, barbed wire and more. In the image there is a freezer, the main area which sells meat and a dark room. I personally don’t know what else should/can be done to make it better. Thanks for any suggestions!
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I would change the letters on the front a bit so they can be easier to read, i think the t, y and the c are very hard to read
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Good point. They are a bit more clearer in-game I guess the lighting is somewhat messed up in the photo but I will be sure to get on it. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Looks like a butcher shop for some game like Da Hood, or some story game, whatever.
It looks absolutely amazing!
As said i would change some letters to be more visible.
But otherwise it looks epic!
Good job!
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Pretty epic, to be honest can’t find any remarks.
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I love the bricks on the walls 
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I disagree with that. It makes the shop look entirely realistic! It adds great effect, outstanding job!
I rate it 9/10. The realism of this is insane. There are so many small details like the dirt underneath the bin and the slanted wood on the window. Like I said to @SheepyStranger, the text looks great. Only thing I would say is maybe change the color of the counters. Great work, keep it up!
Happy building,
DevTigerr
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Thanks for the suggestion and positivity! What colour do you think I should change the counters to? Perhaps a concrete white?
That or a darker gray would look nice. I also just noticed that the way into the shop is a ramp. Maybe change that to a small staircase?
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Nice building! Looks great, this is not feedback on this particular building but modeling in 3d software can give even nicer results and lower the amount of vertices/parts. Or you could change from the default textures to different ones. Personally, I just don’t like Roblox textures because they are used so much in any Roblox game, and there is not a lot of variabilities.
I really like this build. The detail is excellent and it’s nice to see that you were able to pack a lot of detail in such a small build.
However, I think the refrigerator doesn’t follow the same amount of detail as other parts of the build. It’s not as consistent. You should probably add some AC units, containers, and maybe tubes/pipes on the top so that it doesn’t look like the chains are clinging to random parts of the roof.
Other than that, awesome job!
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