I am currently working on a game called “The Country Elevator”.
It has 36 floors in total currently.
Also looking for feedback for existing floors
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Lobby
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Starting with lighting in the Lobby the lighting seems very imbalanced - you have a collection of very bright lights near the elevator and then absolutely no lights anywhere else. I’d recommend you tone down the brightness on the lights that already exist and then spread those out across the lobby - maybe try a brightness of 0.5 especially if you are putting them that close to each other
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The lobby design I feel would benefit if it were more open rather than split off into seperate hallways. If you are going for a Country theme maybe redoing the lobby as a large open tavern area/bar would be more beneficial and would also help with navigating the player around diffferent stuff (e.g. when you add a shop it could be a counter in the bar)
Elevator
- Elevator design looks a bit too big - i get if you want to have it slightly larger to try and fit more players in however the elevator looks a bit odd being SO improperly sized as stuff like the railings at head height of the player looks wrong.
- Despite dying on floors you respawn in the elevator a lot of the games have you spawn back in the lobby and then re-enter the elevator as a way of resetting your progress
Minecraft Floor
- Legal limitations aside the obby had no ending as per say you just end up in the open area - maybe some sort of cash prize or benefit for getting to the end
- Should be a timer associated with the obby - and shorten the length on the floor to make it more of a challenge
Colour Block
- The countdown at the beginning is not alligned with the countdown audio that is played
- I dont think you really need the scenery around the colour block arena having the floating in the void vibe (e.g. having boosters on your floating signs) would work a lot better than the copy pasted palm trees as scenery
Collection Security Hall
- Needs more story telling, why is the elevator exploding and then suddenly getting shot at
Curved stairs
- Walking down the stairs inside very fun - maybe include a sliding mechanic for this floor and then have obstacles/broken stairs you have to dodge.
Thats all I played however I belive overall the “country” theme could do with a lot more integration with the different floors and the elevator. As far as I can see you have the american flag colours on the floor in the lobby and thats about as far as the theme goes so it would be nice to see a further representation of the country theme within the game to back up the title of the game.
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