Any recommendation for my building?

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 9:18pm

Im currently working on a roleplay game, this its a good Burger Blox?

Thanks guys after Modeling and Reviewing your feedbacks finally i have the model for my game!, Thanks for all

blvetitanic · October 28, 2020, 9:26pm

It is pretty good, but here are some things I have to say:

You should probably add windows on the side
I suggest adding a drive through line

The image was hard to see, but I did the best I could.

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 9:29pm

Thanks, I will keep it in mind

XxEvilCraftxX · October 28, 2020, 9:42pm

I would recommend that the windows could sometimes look transparent, make the logo look bigger and the entrance where it is located should not go over the roof so much.

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 9:44pm

Thanks for the recommendation

ceylores · October 28, 2020, 10:10pm

If possible, can you post a photo closer to the building?

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 10:13pm

Sure!

HoIidayInCambodia · October 28, 2020, 10:19pm

Not bad at all. You should probably complete the road and add street lights/other details to it obliviously

ceylores · October 28, 2020, 10:20pm

Are you going for classic Bloxburg/Neighborhood of Robloxia look, or do you want to make it look like a build you could find in real life? (saying real life doesn’t mean like a modern-day Burger King, I just can’t think of the correct words to call it)

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 10:33pm

Im searching for a game like real life, in game language, a atmosphere like jailbreak, or wild west, but on a roleplay game

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 10:33pm

Thanks You help me alot with ur opinion

ceylores · October 28, 2020, 10:43pm

I’ll try to leave some suggestions based on that. Here are some of my thoughts on the build in general:

From the first photo, it looks like you can see through the windows. However, in the close up photo it doesn’t look like you can look through the windows. If you cannot look through them, I always recommend adding a yellowish glow to them, so it looks like the building is in use. If you have a basic understanding of Lua, you can add a day/night system that makes the windows light up during the day and go back to the blue during the day.
From the first photo, it looks as though the road just cuts off and the building is right there. I would add a parking lot, and make a little platform surrounded by grass. If you do add that, you can add benches or outside seating.
In my opinion, the build is lacking decoration. Sure, you have the sign and windows, however that isn’t enough to me. You can add some vegetation to the outside/inside with some lighting. If you’re going for a more realistic look, you can make it look like the concrete is old and has a few cracks in it. I also feel like the sign should be centered with the entrance with a few spotlights pointing at it. (you also spelt whoppers wrong in case you didn’t intentionally do it like that)
I won’t completely restate what @blvetitanic stated above, however more windows across the side and back would definitely benefit the overall build.

Those are just a few things I noticed from first glance! Other than that, I wish you well on your build and good luck with your game!

AZtech28 · October 28, 2020, 10:55pm

Why does this have the GFX tag???

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 10:57pm

Thanks for suggestions i will take in into mind, im currently updating it thanks

DapperFoxySWAT · October 28, 2020, 10:58pm

Because it will be a realistic roleplay game

DapperFoxySWAT · November 2, 2020, 4:58pm

Thanks guys

POMKYC · November 2, 2020, 5:56pm

It’s pretty nice but I would add would make the Signa bigger, something like this

DapperFoxySWAT · November 2, 2020, 6:01pm

woah ok, its a good idea but not so big