Ahoy!
Back at it again, this time I used sabers for the first time and I kinda like it, what are your thoughts? And can I change some things to make it better? Thanks.
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There is a gap where his pelvis would be, and the legs look too unnatural. The render looks a bit too desaturated, the contrast should be a bit higher. The background looks a bit questionable, and the person’s outfit doesn’t really match the whole idea besides the color. The flame or electric effects around the person is in the wrong spots at some areas, and at some other areas where there should be effects there is none.
Try working on the lighting and effects, the poses are pretty minor.
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awesome work man, you used nice colors and it goes well together! something i noticed, the pose. try to make it more natural, and be sure every body part rig is naturally together like a real human would be. 
the saber effect would look nice around the character’s head too. other than that, awesome!