Any way I can make this look better and more realistic?

all recommendations and considerations are appreciated

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Did i add too much blood that goes against TOS??

Without changing the models, Iā€™d say:

Use some lighting effects.
Donā€™t display names above characters (ie ā€œDummyā€)
Try to use matching or similar colours, since black to grey to brown/black is really conflicting.

As for the TOS question, Iā€™d say youā€™re alright, but thereā€™s no exact answer, since its pretty much a a chance between who Roblox feels has the right to use blood.

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the entire room is like FILLED with blood, like thereā€™s no way too people splattered THAT mmuch blood EVERYWHER

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Yea i might take away the head and blood at the front

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I really love your build, if you want to make this more realistic, you should add some lighting because what is missing is there is no lighting, this is optional but i think it would look cool and less empty if you had those butcher hooks with corpse hanging off it

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See post #3, that is too much. Nobody wants their 6 yo to stumble into that game inadvertently.

thats why i put a warning When they join

I see this and question just what happened there, seems a bit too dark for Roblox if Iā€™m being honest

Then donā€™t play the game, who cares about the 6 year old. Iā€™ve seen worse.

Yea im not a good builder so I donā€™t know what else i an add except the blod stains, luckily the blood stains wont be in the actual game, just a concept

If you make games on Roblox you need to care about the six year old, obviously.

Roblox isnā€™t all Adopt Me and pet simulator my friend. You can make games for older audiences (horror games). Donā€™t like it? Donā€™t play it, end of conversation.

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OP asked for all considerations. If you donā€™t agree with my opinion thatā€™s fine, but he asked for ā€˜allā€™ and that is my opinion. There is no code mechanism to prevent a six year old from joining any game on Roblox. The parent can supervise, but there is no way to know what is in a game before you play it. While you can have a target audience you still have to account for players of any age joining the game unless an age based filter is added. It is the responsibility of the game maker to make the game appropriate for EVERYONE.

  • To me all the black textures on the walls and the red ones on the ceiling are too ā€œinvasiveā€, i would remove some of them.
  • The walls, floor and ceiling have very constrasting colors with themselfes, I would add some separation between the ceiling/walls and floor/walls.
  • The room seems empty. Try adding more models to your room, like a swinging lantern, a cabinet.
  • The bodyes should have clothes and a natural skin color, not a grey one. Also the bodyes shouldā€™nt have a smiley face on them, I donā€™t know if they where happy of dying or what.

Hope this help.

Thankyou for clarifying that to them, that is my plan since their is no ACTUAL way to prevent underaged kids from playing my game

Thats the main problem: The room is too empty, unfortunately what im making is a police interviewing room so it doesnt have much i can add to it

Its hard to see with it so dark, but do you have a chair for the officer and a chair for the suspect?

Maybe add a clock on the wall. Usually I think there is a spotlight on the table.

Thereā€™s a title, description, and thumbnails. That should be enough to get an idea of whatā€™s to come.

I agree and disagree at the same time. Not every game has to be suitable for children (to an extent of course). In this situation, I assume OP is making a horror game. Horror games 9 times out of 10 arenā€™t made with 6 years olds in mind but for a much older audience. ā€œ:scream:ā€, welcome to the genre that isnā€™t Adopt Me and Brookhaven.

so what youā€™re like a roblox moderator I donā€™t think you know about phantom forces
also Iā€™m pretty sure youā€™ve seen those 18+ games without clothing

also it doesnā€™t matter if itā€™s appropriate for a 6 year old or not itā€™s about if his build looks good or not

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