Any way to improve this build?

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#1

I’m working on a fighting game with a friend with map rotation, you can see what the other maps look like here: Any map ideas for my fighting game?

This is one of the new maps I made and while I am proud of it, I am not happy with how empty it looks, do you have any suggestions on what I can fill the emptiness with? The map is a cavern map with lava on the ground, sort of like a mine.

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Here is an updated version of the map using (almost) all of the suggestions:

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I added pebbles, ores, pillars, different colored trees, and more. Anything else I should change?

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#2

I think adding some variation would look nice (eg esch tree has a bit of a different color). I also noticed that the ground and tree transition quite abruplty, maube add some sorta of “base” to the tree?

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#3

As @PILOT5A said, it could use with some variation. Maybe a subtle difference in the colour of the rocky walls and on top of that, you could probably add some rubble and some black soot?

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#4

What do you mean by “base”? Like roots?

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#5

Maybe adding more decoration it feels pretty bare bones imo - no hate though

#6

I’m asking what I should fill it with.

#7

maybe some ores with different colors more pickaxes maybe some cavey pillars of stone

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#8

Yes roots could possibly work, i just dont rewlly like how to ground transitions to the trees

#9

walls kinda boring rest is great!

#10

Looks great mate, only thing I’d suggest is that the ceiling should almost be a bowl shape kind of instead of just flat and make it more rocky instead of just a smooth surface. This is a cave afterall but it feels bloxy. I think everything else honestly looks amazing.

#11

Forgot to show the roof, its not flat :+1:

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#12

Maybe you could add some planks as short bridges that people can use to get across some parts of the map easier.

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#13

Yea try burnt wood or even some rock terrain because thats the usual terrain thats is present at a volcano.

#14

Its not a volcano, it’s a cavern.

#15

Oh then some rocks or stalagmites would work great sorry for the confusion

#16

Also the walls are yoo flat try rounding them out or add pinches to the design

#17

In the second picture, where the minecart track goes into what appears to be a cave, it might look nice to make the cave look dark, and not just a stone wall.