Any way to improve this?

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#1

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I have a gate here for my game, is there anything I can improve on it to make it even better?

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#2

I would add more detail to it as it looks bland. The gate should have a better design as well.

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#3

I’m no builder but I’m not exactly slacking on design, so here’s a few pointers:

  1. Your gate looks a bit too much like a ladder, it probably would function like one too.
  2. Try larger parts for borders and a couple extra parts for the gates interior, like the beautiful gate in @ForgetableLife’s post.
  3. Vertical support beams look better in practice than the horizontal vibe you’ve got atm.
  4. If you’re currently at the stage where it opens (via script or otherwise) try making it swing on a hinge with a bouncy motion rather than just appear/disappear or sliding open/shut.
  5. If nothing else I suggested is your fancy, try less contrasting colors. You’ve got a pastel brick look on the walls but the gate is a pitch black and it hurts the contrast. Maybe a shinier gate? Black just doesn’t fit in with the current design.
  6. (Really 5 Cont.) If however you do follow the tips from @ForgetableLife and myself, black will likely do just perfect.

And honestly that’s all I got.

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#4

I think it needs a little more texture.

some decorations would help.

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#5

I agree with ForgetableLife it needs more detail

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Better?

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#7

The design is better, and it looks pretty good.

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How is this as a gate?

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#9

The gate looks way better. I love the design!

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#10

Yeah that’s way nicer.

It’s got more detail and i guess the grass makes it look better too. Lol

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#11

Woah that was a major improvement from what you had before. If I had to make one last recommendation, I would add a design on top of the white podiums, particularly the ones connected to the gate and maybe the other ones in the distance as well.

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