Anything I could add to my game?

Hello! So I recently created this game called, “Raise a Moai” it is basically a game where you raise a Moai. I published it but feel there could be more added.

It would be really cool if anyone could give any feedback/bugs/or cool ideas for me to add! I don’t mind if you have bad feedback I just really want to hear some new ideas!

Here is the game: raise a 🗿 - Roblox

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I got far twice and unfortunately I didn’t beat it, but here’s some of my thoughts:

you should be more informative of some of the things you can do in the game. for example,

  • im kinda dumb, but I had no idea you could click to open the back door to the laundry room, maybe mention this is possible…?
  • do the other moai make additional money? I didn’t know who to click, so i only clicked the 2x moai because I couldn’t tell what was happening. I had the additional moai, starter/hungry moai, buff moai, and the 2x moai.
  • I tried giving the moai some 2x milk, but after using the “Interact” proximity prompt, nothing happened. did something happen, or is this a bug?
  • what do the plants do? I filled 2/4 planters, but I had no idea if the water I was spending was even helpful for the game
  • does the shop decoration have a purpose? does it raise happiness? what does happiness even do?
    ^ players would be thinking about things like this while playing the game, try to explain it without going overboard with info, making the game too

other thoughts:

  • some of ui is pretty basic, its not bad, but adding some detail can inhance the feel of the game
  • during the tutorial, I was walking around and I had no idea that my moai was losing hunger. you should start ticking down on moai’s hunger after a player skips or starts the tutorial, but you should also disable getting cash until the end of the tutorial so this feature isnt abused
  • during my first run i was always low on cash, and I constantly bought burgers. try adding more cash sources or showing different ways you can make money besides washing clothes and clicking your moai.
  • during the 10th birthday, there’s a cutscene asking the player to purchase the moai a gift or to buy a gamepass. I did not want to buy a gamepass, and I did not know how to buy the moai a gift besides the regular stuff on the internet, which i couldn’t afford early game.
  • the map is pretty bland, try adding decor or something to spice it up. an example could be vegetation/trees, terrain, etc. also i noticed some random stuff floating, such as the nuke area and a house. you should put this out of player view, it makes the game look bad.

bugs:

  • when I hold a piece of clothing it wont go in the machine unless its unequipped. also if im right, I think you can accidentally start the washing machine without putting in any clothes.
  • when I lose the game continues playing, I can still earn money, buy stuff, etc. also the music constantly loops.

overall, I had fun, but sometimes the poo became a hastle.

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forgot to mention this but you should let the player know about your “headstart” gamepass, I didn’t know about it until halfway through my second playthrough. maybe you can tell them through a popup after the tutorial, for example.

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Thank you! Also sorry for being late.

So I read your notes that were really useful, I will make some changes like adding more instructions without the tutorial and fix that milk problem. I had a similar issue but this one is new.
Also I will try and spice the map up I already got ideas. **Be cool if you had some **
good ideas for the map too!

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UPDATE! I made some bug fixes to make the game better @chrisby_bacon thanks for pointing out them. Most of the bugs were the ones you found.

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