I made this new ad and I just want to see how appealing it looks. I’m trying to get and efficient ad for my game, please give me some feedback.
Hey,
Sorry but, I don’t really get your ad if I am honest 
Think of visual hierarchy, what do you want me to see first? Make this bigger and other things smaller, for example the prices bigger than everything else.
I don’t really understand it. I don’t know what the game is or anything. Maybe add a bit of information.
Do you want to drive visits or sales? This seems to me as sales, which may not be good. More visits = more sales. Only people who know the game will click it to purchase something due to the lack of information and it only promoting selling something.
I’d also add more images, it looks a bit plain and I wouldn’t stop to read it for long.
Maybe make the contrast on the robux values slightly higher so they pop out.
There is other good stuff with it, but I’m just listing improvements.
Why would I click on this ad?
Think about what you’re showing:
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P2W items
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Listing of gamepasses.
It’s showing some of the dev products that can be purchased in the game.
Yes, but making the robux part the primary part of your advertisement may not be the best. people will see the robux part first and first impression is really important. Maybe add some aspects of the game into the advertisement, so people know about the game you are trying to advertise here.
People will dislike if spending robux is one of the first impressions, it makes a P2W feel.
From my view, the first thing i noticed was the sharp, colorful title and the pale light blue backround. I can see you were just trying to make the title more noticeable than everything else, but what I’d do is make the backround as bright and bold as the title, that’d make it more attractive. Also I think u need more of a color scheme cause I don’t think blue, red, and orange go together. Good work though!