Arctic 'Futuristic' Base

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#1

Hey guys,

This is a little creation that I’ve been working on, it’s influenced by the game Subnautica Below Zero. It took me around three and a half hours to do in total. This is the first build that I’ve done on Roblox - so please do give me feedback and tell me anything you’d like to suggest!

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Thank you very much for your time.

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#2

Looks neat! the back looks kind of blend though and the neon on the big platform thing seems a little too much but overall it’s good!

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#3

couple of preliminary thoughts

  • needs more curves
  • pipe fence thing looks a bit weird
  • neon a bit bright
  • one technique u might want to employ is using cylinders to add a curve onto the edge of ur steps, gives it the +1 smooth look
  • build the base into the terrain maybe? the curving of the foundation in the group looks a bit weird imo
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#4

For me, it looks great as it is! I like the handles as well as the elevated floor. I think you did a good job on this!

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