I was going to use this as a portfolio banner, but even though it’s mostly finished, I still think it looks a bit odd. This is my first time trying to do a “neon” type of style so any type of feedback would be appreciated!
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Might I suggest adding some detail to the background? It looks a little plain when the subjects on a black background
Lighting needs worked on to dark on the lighting.
Highly recommend photoshop if you try to make high quality GFX.
Add a background.
Paint your own rim light.
Thanks,
Had fun reporting all of the stuff you need to fix on this amazing piece of artwork.
And I know you can become better you just need to think it through and see if you can make
another amazing masterpiece.
Your fellow,
AlmightyYumzy.
Do you have any examples if what I could add? My friend also told me to add a background but I wasn’t sure of what to add.
Reason why it decent because you can add more stuff to more stuff to the background to make it look better.
the render’s well done, however it looks a little plain. try adding some more overlays maybe? 
