Are these good ideas for a story game?

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#1

My roblox game idea:

It is like the game “Episode” but in a clothing store.
The Player works at a retail store behind the cash register and customers come up to them and ask for a bunch of stuff.

The customer says something like
“where do I find the kids section”

And the player gets multiple reply choices.

When the player chooses answer: “It’s upstairs”
the customer says “thank you”.

But when the player chooses to reply with “I don’t know, go away” the customer says something like “excuse me?!" And goes away angry

There is also a Karan customer with the most ridiculous answers and the player gets to choose whether they want to stay professional or for a fee get to reply in a funny way.

Example: Karan: “The sun is too hot, do something about it, I cannot enjoy shopping here”

The player gets to either say “I’m sorry, we can turn up the air conditioner” and karan would say something sassy like “you better”.

Or for 15 diamonds, the player gets to choose a reply like : “Let me just go up there and tell the sun to keep it down a bit, alright?” and the Karan would say something or do a certain animation or something.

This is basically the whole game.

Now for all the technical stuff,

I want a starter pack with 25 diamonds, every player gets and every reply costs 15 diamonds.

That way, I can get the player to spend money.

I want the player to stay in POV mode,

The npcs should walk around the store.

A music play on/off button and maybe a feedback button for players to write something in.

I also want my user to have 999999 diamonds so I can play the whole game without having to pay for the diamonds with my own robux.

I also want the replies to have a wait script, like 3 seconds so the player doesn’t click through all of the anwesers and replies.

For the pay:

I have 3.8k robux, that should be appropriate giving I already have a map plus npcs.

However, I don’t know how to pay with robux someone help me.

I already have all the questions and replies written down and everything that happens, if the player chooses this or that answer.

What are yalls opinion on this?

Is my pay okay for this? would you, as a scripter charge me more?

Please dont flag this, I dont know where else to put this

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#3

It’s quite good actually, the UI needs to be more detailed but overall good idea! The answers should better be randomized, but as said, good idea!

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#4

Sounds like a pretty cool game idea! You should put yourself in the shoes of a player and ask yourself what would make yourself return to the game to keep up your game’s activity.

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#5

That actually looks really cool! To answer some questions:

This is usually done through:

  • t-shirts/game passes (person you are commissioning will create a t-shirt/game pass to buy, but usually will make it a bit more because of the 30% tax).
  • Group funds payout-No need to pay extra for the tax, BUT you will have to wait a good 2 weeks when the person joins before being able to payout+ it takes a good 3-5 days for robux to actually go into the group.

I recommend first creating the whole game and figuring out how much diamonds someone might need do complete the basic game. Than add special/more fun routes for extra diamonds, which can either be earned by buying, completing a run, daily login, group logins, etc.

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#6

This is a very good idea! I would definitely play this!!

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#7

To give yourself alot of diamonds you need to add leaderstats script so you can using console command give yourself alot of diamonds, the command is: game.Players.Tarikatin.leaderstats.Diamonds.Value = (amount how much you want diamonds)

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