Arsenal Fan Art GFX

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#1

I am a big Arsenal fan and even though this render took while I loved the whole project!

ArsenalGold
ArsenalGold1920Ă—1080 1.66 MB

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#2

I really love the Smooth Lighting!, the Bent Arms on the Blue Torso guy looks really nice clean an smooth! so does everything else!, but I would working on making the person that die body parts spread a little more and a little more rotated like the legs.
but overall this is pretty nice!

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#3

Thanks I tried to make the death effect spring. Thanks for the feedback!!!

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#4

Looks really good! I don’t know if you’re asking for criticism but you should make the gold metallic to look more realistic!

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#5

Everything here looks mostly smooth, but you could work a little on some aspects.

Such as:

  1. Make the body parts from the second character look like they weren’t moved in a straight line.
  2. Add a flash for the gun so it looks like the second character is actually shot.

But besides that I like it, good job.

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#6

Thanks! I’m so excited to have you comment on this! I love your work!

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#7

Looks good, I think the shadows on the noob are a bit harsh, instead of a HDRI I reccommend using an Area Light over the whole Scene and add a sun lamp for some slight shadows, but it still looks alright. A flash from the gun would look good and maybe a bullet?

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#8

Wow this is so cool! It’s really clean and awesome. If you are looking for feedback I’ll be glad to give some.

  • The floor is a little tooo bright as well as the Brick-battler’s head.

  • The Delinquent’s pose is a bit unnatural and might I add weird-looking.

That’s it feedback-wise, I hope you can take this advice in a good way :slight_smile: Keep up the good work :+1:

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#9

The overall concept (and execution) is well done! It doesnt pop-out super much, so I’ll leave an example of edits you could do (don’t have to do them all, might’ve went a bit overboard haha) on how to make it stand out just a little more

The example

remake
remake1920Ă—1080 2.33 MB

I attempted to make the golden avatar more metallic (but it gets a bit tricky with what I have to use to execute it amazingly) aswell as added some flares to make key elements stand out more/ contrast with less important elements.

But, with a bit of practice, you can find your style and improve on fine details, as you are already decent as is currently.

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