Art Critque/Feedback

I would like some constructive criticism from this!
point out all the problems as it will help me tremendously!


That is pretty good!
These are some critiques :

  1. I think you can do the face better, I am not the best artist out there but I think you should try drawing a wide smile rather than a line smirk or well, improve the expressions In general.
  2. Some lines on the hair (mostly near the head) are a bit too cluttered, they don’t look very tidy.

Aside from these, It’s pretty well done :slight_smile:


Alright thank you, Ill keep these in mind next time I make something

1 Like