This isn’t my first shirt, but this is my first shirt I’m made alone. I’d like to have feeeback on it, please be honnest, tell me how I could improve it. I also want criticism, but please stay constructive.
As it’s made by one person, there’s obviously less headroom for effort, but this shirt stoops too low.
The base texture is nice, but the text just doesn’t fit. It’s misshaped, poorly coloured, and almost unreadable.
I would reuse the base texture, but find a much more readable but still childish font. (Comic Sans is overused, find something else, perhaps this font?)
As for colour, I might go with a white font, with a darker blue for an outline.
Finally, for placement, I’d have the text along the top of the back side, and then maybe as a badge on the front side. Maybe some along the arms too?
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It’s a great idea! Thank you very mich for your feedback, I really appreciate it!
I’ll consider maybe making another version of this shirt!
Have a great day!
For your first shirt, it’s not bad. But to professionals (which i am not), it would probably make them puke.
Your font selection is… something. Could definetly do with some work. When I say something I mean that it’s hard to read. Thats all I really have to say.
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Thanks for your feedback! I will try make it better!