"Barrel of Enraged Applejuice" Code Review

Help and Feedback Code Review
#1

I was making a useful tool for my game and I made this (Barrel of Applejuice for short) There are some unfinished things like the drink animation and juice particles.

local player = game:GetService("Players").LocalPlayer
local character =  player.Character or player.CharacterAdded:Wait()
local humanoid = character:WaitForChild("Humanoid")
local tool = script.Parent
local animator = humanoid:WaitForChild("Animator")
local animation = Instance.new("Animation")
animation.AnimationId = "rbxassetid://83761011530111"
local animationTrack = animator:LoadAnimation(animation)
local tweenservice = game:GetService("TweenService")
local speed = 50
local gainsound = script.Parent.sounds.EffectGain:Clone()
local drinksound = script.Parent.sounds.Drink:Clone()
local losesound = script.Parent.sounds.EffectLose:Clone()
local debounce = false

tool.Equipped:Connect(function()
	animationTrack:Play()
end)

tool.Unequipped:Connect(function()
	animationTrack:Stop()
end)

tool.Activated:Connect(function()
	if not debounce then
		debounce = true
		drinksound.Parent = character.HumanoidRootPart
		drinksound:Play()
		task.wait(0.7)
		gainsound.Parent = character.HumanoidRootPart
		gainsound:Play()
		local goal = {
			WalkSpeed = 16
		}
		local info = TweenInfo.new(120, Enum.EasingStyle.Linear, Enum.EasingDirection.Out)
		local tween = tweenservice:Create(humanoid, info, goal)
		humanoid.WalkSpeed += speed
		tween:Play()
		tween.Completed:Wait()
		losesound.Parent = character.HumanoidRootPart
		losesound:Play()
		debounce = false
	end
end)

Let me know what tips you have

i know you guys are thinking: so you’re trying to recreate the barrel of starlight arent you

2 Likes