Basic Low Poly House

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#1

This is my first low poly creation!
i would like to get some improvment suggestion from you!

Plugins i use

  • F3X
  • GapFill

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#2

I’ve removed the tag from your title–that’s what the “optional tags” section is for. :slight_smile:

#3

Well for me, it looks great for a starter on low poly building…
BTW, keep up the good work!!:+1:

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#4

Hey, that’s pretty good. Can you include some other perspectives?

I love the walls, it curves a little out. The ends of the roofs don’t quite match. There is an empty gap that should have gotten filled up. If that’s what you meant to be, you should be consistent with the other side.
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You definitely aced the smoke, but the chimney doesn’t math with that low-poly feeling. Instead of straight up, you should curve as it gets up.

I feel like the bricks on the front were a little oddly placed. These two are too close to each other, and if you’re going to do the front, you should do the sides (and the back) aswell.
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I love the logs outside! That really gives me that smooth cartoony style.

The last things you should do are add some decor and fix the colors? The sets of colors are a bit odd, and the outside is a little plain. Fix these, and voila, you have got yourself a very nice basic Low Poly House!

Keep up your work! You’re very creative and talented. You are going to be a very talented developer one day! :slightly_smiling_face:

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#5

Thanks for your feedback ! :happy3:

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#6

Thanks man i appreciate :heart:

#7

Insofar it’s a decent build i like the color scheme you have. I think the build could use some small details since this is your first build.

I’d make the door and door frame smaller so a window two could be placed on the build if you consider changing the placement of the house. Right now, the entire building looks bland on the sides, maybe throw a few windows or place more bricks around it you could possibly re-size them since they seem rather large looking the door could use a door handle and a small window on it you could either add some windows on the house or door whatever one looks good to you.

Fill the house or terrain with some items and also remove the brick on the right side a small window could be placed there overall point I believe the build is way too empty and needs to be improved. Add some small objects on the ground, it lack detail in it’s particular area. Maybe try adding grass, rocks, bushes on the ground, trees etc.

Other than that, i like the design of it small decorations would help.

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#8

Thanks for your feedback ill work on it to make it much better !

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#9

This is really good! Nice job!

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#10

Really good design of house. Looks like 3D, keep up with the good work!

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#11

Looks really nice! (30 charsss)