Two days ago, I downloaded Blender for the first time, and spent the next few hours fiddling around with the tools, watching tutorials, etc. I decided to attempt to actually make something, and I settled on a low poly, cartoony model of a sawed-off double barrel shotgun.
All feedback is valued, ESPECIALLY the negative!
Very nice! To me it looks more like a sawed off/dbs mix. If I were you, I would make the barrels a tad longer, and the wooden grip a little less thick. Other than that, awesome job!
this is an amazing model it looks great I think you should add some textures or details and not just a plain grey and brown color but other than that amazing model and keep up the great work
Nice job! I’m amazed how you learned so much just within this 2 days ( I took a week to learn and I still can’t do models like yours ;~; ). I could suggest you to make the barrel ( or whatever you call it ) longer, but other than that, it’s pretty good. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for stopping by, I’ll definitely update the model with your suggestions in mind!
Textures would 100% be a good place to go if I intended to make the model realistic, but as stated before, that is currently beyond my current capabilities.
I feel as though plain ol’ grey and brown fits the style.
Thank you for letting me know what you think, it is always good to have more opinions.
Haha, you probably have other things to attend to though!
Just extended the barrel, It really makes the model look better, thanks for your time !
Should add more pictures (like down the barrel) the stock seems a little skinny and, sharp? for some reason. I don’t think the cartoony feel is doing you much favors. I have never held or seen a shotgun with two triggers, is that normal? You could add some kind of rubber to the back for shoulder recoil. Imo, the cartoony unrealistic aspects of it makes it look abnormal and I think it’d look better as a more realistic model. Nevertheless, good job.
I’m afraid that you don’t grasp the concept of “unrealistic”, it’s not as complicated as you seem to think. The gun was not made to be an exact replica of a real life dbs, while still maintaining all of the aspects that makes the type of gun unique.
Double barrel shotguns have two triggers, one for each barrel. It is VERY common.
However, I appreciate your input.
the gun style is simple blocky but the triger and the thing around it dosent match the style is slim and detailed
It looks great! It looks like it would go good in a zombie survival game! 
I totally agree with you, I just couldn’t force myself to do it any other way 
It probably would, if I knew how to script 
It looks really cool, but the barrels are a tad bit too long, where they kind of look like a DBS shotgun. They could also be a bit thicker as well. But overall, it’s a pretty good looking shotgun.
He just extended them after being told the barrels were too short
Overall, i think it looks amazing! The cartoon feel will flow very nicely with roblox’s graphical style, keep it up!
As I said in my post, it does you no favors. If you made it more realistic it would look a lot better, that is my opinion. Also, don’t ask ESPECIALLY for negative feedback then get passive aggressive in your reply. I’ve never held a shotgun with 2 triggers, but thats just me
Looks amazing! Keep up with the good work! <3 
Maybe I’m just a passive aggressive sorta person 
more realistic isnt necessarily better than cartoon or worse. It entirely depends on the game you are making and the graphical style. Roblox graphics are generally geared toward the cartoon feel, although it is possible to make realistic graphics. It all depends, and i do not feel it would be correct to criticize this for the graphic style it is meant for.
Thats not what I said, I said that being unrealistic is not doing him any favors because it doesn’t look as good. I will not further argue as this is not the place so perhaps you should re read what I had said because 1. I myself prefer lowpoly/cartoon and 2. its not what I said
