Hey everyone!
I’ve just completed my third Roblox showcase, and I’d love to get some feedback on it! 
The main building was made entirely by me, but the cars were made from Roblox, and the pedestrian crossing sign was made by CoolAngrybirdsrio43. 
Screenshots/Photos:
Looks cool!
Maybe more people and more different characters
Outside it being very simple, it is quite nice 
Maybe adding some details, decorations, etc. 
nice build i like the buidling design quite a lot i see you used a roblox police car free model there 
Hi, thanks for the feedback. I did put full credit for the cars, saying that they were made by Roblox. Thanks for the feedback though! 
The cars were most likely not made by Roblox themselves, I recommend you take another look at their creator and credit them appropriately, although who knows, maybe Roblox is uploading meshes as of date, but I seriously doubt it. Best of luck on your endeavors.
The outside looks a bit plain, but alright. I’d say it is suitable for games like Adopt Me.
You might also want to change the sign “Entry” to “Entrance”.
He clearly asserts that the model was made by ROBLOX.
Holy smoke. Don’t comment on a post without reading it.
So? Its still good looking he did some of it as he stated.
They actually did release that free model car:
@SubToBloxay , overall nice job! I enjoyed the showcase, though a bit more detail would be nice. Really the only thing I would change is that the road and grass cuts off abruptly - I would extend them, so the scene doesn’t look like it is floating. One final thing - the lines across the road are a bit too high, they would pop a car’s wheels. Just my thoughts,
Infinite_Visions
I stand corrected then. Thanks for the clarification.
Thank you very much for the feedback! I will take in that important feedback for my next showcase.
