Greetings! I am creating some new songs for my game. I am wondering what you think of this.
Updated version after some feedback:
It first plays when you join the lobby.
Let me know what you think, and if I should change anything!
Thanks in advance!
That is a very good tune for the lobby, i would give a rating of 5/5
Overall it is a good piece of music to listen to, that deserves a thumbs up from me 
Iām not a musician (although Iām thinking of getting into music) but somethingās just really off. It almost feels out of tune.
I get itās lobby music, but youād think it would be more exciting. You want to be excited about getting into the game, not feel like a youāre in a dreary purgatory.
Also, thereās really nothing to it. Itās some piano and ukulele(I thinkā¦) with a rather uninspiring drum beat in the background. Then it just switches to a drum solo that frankly overstays itās welcome and thatās it. It lacksā¦ depth? I really donāt know how to say it.
I really have no idea what Iām talking about, so what I said might just be a incomprehensible mess of an opinion piece. But I hope it at least made some sense, and I wish you well on your musical endeavors.
Also, the TTS voice saying āBloxy Kartā cracked me up. I know itās a watermark, though.
My thoughts similarly. To me it feels unsettling and strange.
What could make it more exciting? It is a re-creation of what is currently in the game.
(Also to @KristopherVector )
More instruments, a faster tempo, less out of tune ukulele sounds. Just spitballing here.
How is this?
It should be relaxing, the instruments you use are weird and unsettling as I said earlier
More instruments? The amount of instruments doesnāt often matter, as long as it sounds right
In this case it should be a little more relaxing, Iām not saying overly, but more than this.
It feels really repetitive and random. I like the percussion though.
The music seems good but I think you should get rid of the beeping noises and add more instruments. Like a beat in the background or smth
Itās not really out of tune, since itās digital. I think you mean the mix of pitches donāt feel right.
Yeah, thats what I meant. didnāt know how to say it
Itās good for a start, but I think you should probably stick to a key. The note of the big beep sound clashes with the main melody that plays, and I think thatās what the issue may be.
I can tell youāre using Garageband (I think)! Garage band honestly a really good starting tool. You should use the feature called āQuantatizingā. It allows you to āsnapā the notes onto the grid so that theyāre not off beat, unless thatās the style youāre going for.
Iām a producer so Iām down to help any way 
Yeah. Im thinking of buying Logic if they make an iPad version for iOS 16.
the note feel random and ai generatedā¦
Its repeating bloxy kart in a horrid tone of a voice, its almost a bit annoying.
But theres also some beats within the music which would sound better if they got turned down a bit in volume, sort of sounds like you mashed a tons of beats together
Hmm well better-yet Soundcloud is free and better for beginners, it comes with a easy to use studio, tons of already noncopyrighted free to use sounds, and tutorials, and team create for if you wanna work with people.
Its for mobile and pc!
I have a Mac, and like to do everything on it. Im also good with GarageBand for now.
I think you meant SoundTrap as I just looked all over soundcloud and couldnāt find anything about making music aside from uploading your own audio files.