Build I made for a theme park I'm working on! How does it look?

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Trying not to leak too much of this land I’m currently working on, so this is basically the most I’ll show as of right now. I’ve been working on this land for a few days now and I’m pretty happy with the outcome. It’s heavily inspired by Camp Jurassic at Universal Studios Orlando, but it has a lot of my own twists. I decided to include a very nice rope course that you take a few ziplines to get to, along with a cave with some water spouts! I’d love some constructive criticism and any feedback on how to improve or what to change, thanks!

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#2

This looks very nice!
One thing I would do is maybe change the rocks so they look a little less smooth on the sides.

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#3

Thanks! I was actually using depth of field to make the photo look a little nicer and focus on the main part of the picture, the rocks dont actually look that smooth in the real game. However, I’m still going to go ahead and make the rocks a little rougher in blender to try and get the triangle count down a bit, as it’s causing a little bit of lag.

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#4

The vegetation, something I absolutely adore, is on-point.

The palm tree is so realistic. So are the bushes. :palm_tree:
Same thing for the rocks. I love it. :smiley:

Only thing I’d change is:

  1. Removing the DepthofField (looks off in this image)
  2. Make it so that the waterfall looks like its coming from somewhere, like a small, bubbling creek, and add edges to the stream (because in real life, water doesn’t magically follow a path and appear out of nowhere.)

You’ve also chosen an excellent skybox, and the bridge looks very clean. Maybe too clean, perhaps? Try adding water splashes and other little details to not make it look so organized. After all, nature is not perfect.

Keep up the work! Cannot wait to see what you make next. Have a good day. :smiley:

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#5

Thanks for the feedback! I love your ideas, however, I’m trying to keep the part count as low as possible in order to reduce lag. I really do like the idea of water puddles and splashes on the bridge, but since this is in the main game I’m going to try to keep it as minimum part count as possible.

Anyways, thanks so much for replying! I hope you have a great day too. :slight_smile:

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