I’ve created a couple builds related to the military genre. I asked a few of my friends to critique my work but I feel like I need more constructive criticism to make the best of quality for my client.
So, I thought of going to the developer forum, here are a few pictures.
I’ve added a clock tower, a filler building which is meant to serve as a barracks, and a podium for officers+
Wrong category. Should be in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations instead.
The build is pretty cool btw. Maybe add some more details here
And why are the windows different? Is it because its glitching, or that’s style?
Moved it to another category, and I believe the windows are different since my PC can’t handle many pixels.
Make the podium’s roof a lot more curved, for this change increments in model(apologies if you knew already).
Add numbers to the clock of the clock tower, pro tip, use Roman numerals. The tower is squarish, so use wedges/ GapFill Plugin. And change to color scheme to dark grey and white.
Make the barrack have a curved roof.
Looks good, but I’d try working on the lighting and possibly making the colors brighten up a bit as it’s quite dull on the barracks build. Consider throwing a door to the build the front area looks alright, but the glass doesn’t look that appealing I’m more talking about the (Front door) try going for something more realistic. Consider making the ambience a bit brighter so that it reflects a realistic feel.
The space around the door area could be placed with something I don’t think barracks aren’t suppose to leave small areas with nothing on it.
In terms of the builds, it’s good the clock tower just got a few errors as you can see in the image below. it holds the proper details regarding the roof I feel like throwing a more structure, roof could possibly improve it, I’m believing this is still a work in progress build if so those small details are important.
A few of the buildings could be more detailed in a few areas: at the start there good builds.
Looks good, but I’d mainly focus on the lighting so that it could give it a cool effect 
