Burger Render Feedback

Hello, today I was modeling a Double Cheeseburger for my Roblox game, and I thought, “I wonder what this would look like rendered” and so I did just that:


This is my first render, and I would like any Feedback. Any feedback will be appreciated! I know I will also have to lower the tri count for Roblox.

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Well, the render overall is good but I suggest you to add some background.

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the lighting looks extremely poor, and the burger sesame seeds are oddly placed. In addition, the burger bun is extremely tall- too tall.

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It’s too tall, the backround is too dark and the seeds are under the burger.

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I agree, the top bun is a bit too tall and the textures look like they don’t actually shape the model, I would recommend changing that. I would also make the cheese look a little more realistic.

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The render is not very good. Buns is too high and thick. I can see you tried to make the buns realistic but there’s an odd spot:
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Also, the sesames are placed under he burger.
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Next thing is that the cheese mesh is not smooth enough and the texture is so smooth that it can reflect lights:
image (sharp edge)
image (cheese don’t reflect lights irl)

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Who say it does not?
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