Cafe build feedback

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#1

Hello! I built this cafe in a half hour. (The build, not the models.)

Please tell me what you think.

Thank you so much! :heavy_heart_exclamation: :+1: :slight_smile:

EDIT1: I added some screenshots, for people who can’t get in the game.

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Oops, I had to mute my computer audio, it went right over. :laughing:

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#2

Can you provide some screenshots of the game? I can’t play the game right now.

#3

try making the light a bit less orangy

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#4

also you should probably add a door and a workplace

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#5

Mhm, I’m working on modeling it.

#6

Sure! :heart:

I will, in a few mins.

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#7

Whats your theme of this build? It will help alot. If I’m right your going for modern realistic build.

#8

Very colorful. Good job, but there’s a few things you can work on.
-Try to reduce clipping between the windows and the walls (make the windows thinner)
-add some sort of separation between the windows and the walls (like a thin, metal texture part)
-Work on the roof, make it a bit smaller
Other than that, great job!

#9

Mhm! Thank you. I’m very proud of it, am I glad you like it! :+1: :heavy_heart_exclamation: :slight_smile:

#10

I believe giving you honest criticism will help your next build be even better than this one, so lemme share what I think :slight_smile:

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First and foremost, I noticed that there was a part stacked on top of the baseplate, visibly cracked open showing the baseplate on the bottom. Lemme show you how you can fix this :slight_smile:
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Step 1, open Workspace and select Baseplate.
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Step 2, open Properties and you can select the Color and Material from there.
Trust me, theres no need for putting grass on top of your baseplate. That’s what the baseplate is for :smiley:
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I’m going to go off a hunch and say you’re a beginner, in this case, free models are totally fine. However, maybe next time try moving them inside into a bigger building.
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I like how you got down Transparency for windows, but there isn’t really much to the interior design of the place. It’s just chairs scattered across the room. Think of how a regular Restraunt / Cafe is structured:
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The kitchen is behind the Cashier, while the seating areas and other stuff are structured everywhere else, giving a comfortable and spacious environment where people can walk around and not feel cramped.

For a beginners build, you did an amazing job. I hope these tips can help make your next build even better!

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#11

@above Your right.
also maybe add a logo and entrance

#12

Oh my gosh-, thank you so much!

I really appreciate this feedback, I shall try this rn! :heavy_heart_exclamation: :+1:

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#13

Maybe install some building tools like Building tools by F3X. They are extremely helpful and help you build very well.

#14

Mhm, I use F3X most of the time, and I know, it REALLY helps!!