Hey Guys! It’s me NFL, I’m here because i have been working on my café for about 1 - 2 Weeks now, And I’m finished i was wondering how much i should sell it for. If you can please leave a commet below and tell me what i should price this for, Or if it needs more work than tell me what i need to work on!
A game link would be very helpful for pricing. but based on the pictures, it’s really understood and simple, (no offense) so somewhere around 500 is a good price in my opinion.
Cafes seem to be in high-ish demand these days, so you picked a good thing to create. With that said, there are a few suggestions I would make before I consider this ready to sell.
The first thing is the size. The map is quite small and seems like it wouldn’t fit a good amount of players, assuming all were inside at once. This goes for the kitchen area also, since most cafes are used by groups that employ a staff. The ceiling is low and has lowhanging lights, which can make navigation a bit tedious if your screen is continuously bouncing off of objects, especially on a mobile device.
My second point is the level of detail. It looks like you put a lot of work into some areas, but left others lacking. For example, you built the floor in sections rather than using a single part, (the ground part in the center isn’t connected with the floor, so you can see the baseplate) but then the roof is only a couple parts stacked in a primitive way. You have a nice white trim on the center wall by the seating, but it only appears in that one spot. The walls beside the front counter for example, are empty. You put a frame around the windows (bonus points for that), but didn’t do the same for the doorway.
Overall, your eye isn’t drawn to any one thing when entering for the first time, whereas in my opinion, the front counter should be able to draw the eye immediately.
My third point is the color choice. Your building uses white as one of the primary colors, so it doesn’t stand apart from the terrain and sky, which are also white. You might also consider making the interior color separate from the exterior color to add some variation.
In its current state, I’d price this build around 500 robux.