Add some lighting and windows, turn off shadows in the window parts so that sunlight goes in. And change sun angle to something that works well with the lighting. And some texture to floor, and some cladding or wood beam/ framing to the ceiling for accent. I think the furnitures look too close together, maybe allow them to spread out a bit / add spaces for isles/ for circulation. and add some nice indoor plants with stem and branches. Add an entry door and the counter area. Thanks.
The cafƩ is way too boring. The walls look ugly, there is a huge blank space, there are no windows, etc. you can reduce the height of the walls. Make better furniture and put some small plants near the seating area too.
I think there are some cool ideas, like the fire place, but here are some things I suggest you try doing!
- Make the room smaller.
- Try using more textures instead.
- Experiment with more colours!
- Decrease the size of the signs.
- Add some windows so there can be more natural lighting.
- Add a stage for the trainers to talk so there can be a more clear view of them.
- Find a building style!
- Look at images for inspiration.
- Use more shapes and maybe try putting together shapes to make other shapes.
Hope this feedback helps!
I agree with @MaddameMari on this, but also maybe add some textures on the ceiling, like possibly placing thin blocks with the āWood Plankā texture above to make it not as blue. I do recommend variety. So far, I think youāre doing great for a first build.
The colors looks pretty bad. It looks way too bright and there isnāt enough lighting or even at all any lighting. Itās also not very detailed, itās mainly just empty on the front and the way the plants are looks weird. Though for a training centre, it wouldnāt matter but I think you would want to make it good if you want your staff to be active or want to be apart of your cafe.
I Donāt know where you came from, But you should atlest motivate him a bit to do better!
Honestly good jobā¦ Take some Suggestions from the comments below and Make it your own!
Keep Building and Keep Learning!!
Hope you Improve, Good luck!
Love your attitude!
To be honest, this build is lacking detail. I would probably use more material textures to make it better. But yet, this is still a nice build!
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not to be rude, but it needs some bizaze, try different fonts, maybe change the color of the grass, and make it kinda stylish, use different colors and materials, etc
Since nobody here is trying to give any practical advice or tools, here I am. Use those plugins as they will make your job a lot easier and more fun.
This is for the titles of the rooms, floors, anything you want to describe that is important enough to. However, if you want to make tiny text, with this plugin you will still also be able to achieve it.
https://www.roblox.com/library/2273628561/ThreeDText-2
Pretty self explanatory, itās pretty good if you want to polish edges.
https://www.roblox.com/library/234946364/Wedge-Edge
If you want to make very tiny text using the first plugin, or want to make anything else extra tiny, use the following plugin:
this is a MUST HAVE for EVERYONE. Trust me, Iām using this to this day and without it, my builds would look not so good. Itās very easy to use, and you can do it to make pretty much everything. Any shape you think of is possible with it, you can make decorations, arches, detailed walls, anything you think of.
Hereās examples of my builds that I made using primarily Archimedes:
https://t0.rbxcdn.com/a835c7d386c69abc6560597d500e92dd
https://t2.rbxcdn.com/d2411dc862063fd8fe80ac8a77035566
https://t0.rbxcdn.com/cd6b90cd8c7b39cc6f0f0ae2d55f618c
Another must have if you want to make polished models without clipping parts and/or taking too much of your time, which can often be as precious as diamonds.
Itās been awhile so Iām pretty sure he has all Plugins, if not then He should say thanks to you!
I think you need to add more textures, Iām sure it will improve it! And also make the seats look smoother, donāt forget the ceiling lamps!
An example to add textures: walls and ceiling
Hope you will have a nice lobby after all of the things I told ya! 