Can I get some feedback on this French Revolutionary build?

Hi, I’ve been making my way through this build. Can you provide me with some feedback to improve it and push it to its limit? Just bare in mind it’s still a work in progress!

Thanks!

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Wow! That is… BEAUTIFUL! I am just speechless, you did so well on this, h-how. Did your computer crash in the makings of this?!

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Thank you. It actually runs pretty well since I’m really skilled in optimisation!

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I’m jealous how you are elite at building,

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Wait your a Developer for Kingdom Life?! I used to play that all the time when I was younger! My brother also plays Kingdom of Hreingar!

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Feedback

Judging the size of the build and the materials used, I am guessing this is probably the home of a noble belonging in Second Estate.

Estates

Before and during most of the French Revolution, French society were primarily based on three Estates. The monarch, King Louis XVI, would’ve obviously been at the top, this was known as the first Estate (this was supported by the belief on the Divine Right at the time). The Catholic clergy and the noble would’ve been represented through the second Estate and everyone else would’ve been classified through the third Estate.

Detail while, it is absolutely incredible. It has an immense amount of detail everywhere and has a good use of textures. The foliage also looks natural and realistic. The only thing I can see that could be improved on is the roof. I know this is still a build in process, but instead of some solid piece, it would instead have tiles or some other sort of roof so it doesn’t look plain and flat.

Anyway, I hope you found this feedback helpful and have a good day.

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I think this is wonderful! You can clearly see your pure talent showing through! I can tell that you have studied types of buildings in detail.

The only thing I would suggest is adding some more colour. Of course, if this doesn’t fit in with the theme then that’s okay. Personally, I like a bit of colour now and then. You could add this in the form of flowers.

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Thank you! The build is based on the Café Théâtre from AC:Unity. Here’s an image of the reference.

I’ll be modelling a roof with detailed custom tiles but I’ll be doing that last since I need to finish the exterior walls for an accurate measurement because I’m in the process of adjusting walls and so on still.

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Thank you!

As you can see here, I have added some flowers.

I’ll be adding more throughout the build though!

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I would like to say was the build you created was…

fantastic!
The Vine, The Pine tree, The Tree and also the building are great. the lightning, however, is great and make the game shine with wonderful creation and also an asset and the decoration that surrounded the map are absolutely insane but also cute as well and The best for last was “The Fountain
Oh my God… WOW

I wish I can create like you but I just a low poly builder nothing it is good to ask a low poly builder. the water sprinkle shoots out the water mmmm… tasty look. anyway, I to amaze on your work and I wish you keep working on this map until you show to the public. that all and I will see you later then.
Bye :wave:

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This build is amazing, and so realistic! Were there any Meshes in this build? Cause this is just amazing and nothing else!

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I don’t know what to say about it, it’s just… AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL! Are you a professional builder? Because that makes it look like you are… I’m speechless.

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Oh my god, Assassin’s Creed: Unity was one of my favourite Assassin’s Creed games, and despite its history of bugs, is to this day still a gorgeous artwork. Seeing this being brought to Roblox and execute with success eye for precision is exciting to say the last. I can’t wait to see what you make of this. Would love to check it out.

As for some feedback, I feel like adding a bit of moss here and there would be nice.


As the rest of the map is quite nature-based, and seeing the perfectly clean footpath, I think it would tie everything together even more.

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Yes I am, haha. You should check out the revamped version of KL2 if you were an old fan!

hot hot hot bro hot hot hot

just so amazing really good job i just think i’d perfect. your lighting skills are on point and i suck at lighting so i admire that big time.

in conclusion this is amazing brooo

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Thank you. I am indeed a professional builder, and I’m glad it shows.

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WOW STUNNING! Can I see some of the indoors?

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One word. Stunning. The lighting, the build the little things…it all is so pleasing to look at. The build is gorgeous. Honestly, this looks amazing. Sadly I have no way for you to improve as this looks so professional to me already. Keep up the good work.

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For Starters, This is a nice and graphically amazing build.

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I used some furniture and assets I was using for the Kingdom Life II Tavern to host a little event a few days ago, so I hope pictures of that will suffice for now until I start working on it.

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