Can I have feedback on my latest game Woodine Hangout?

Can you goys join and rate the terrain in my game, I’ve been watching a few tutorials and I am not good at it though I might be a beginner so i want feedback on it. It is the first game I have created for my new group and the first group game I have ever published so feedback would be really helpful.

https://www.roblox.com/games/6844376162/Woodine-Hangout-Phase-I?refPageId=5e062fba-7355-4f5b-845d-f7aa1124e025

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It’s not bad for a first! I think maybe you should change it so that they can’t zoom out far because I can see the outside of the rocks. I like the butterflies flying around too!

I don’t really know what’s throwing it off, but I think it’s the water and the grass colors unmatching. With the orange butterflies flying over pink water too.

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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try changing the grass color to make it watch the color and fix the terrian.

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The scenery and colours are nice, but I noticed one problematic section with the water:

This feedback is a bit short because it’s only the terrain you are working with right now. Keep polishing the game elements and adding new features; this is a good start.

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try adding some new features and polishing the game.