Hello I made these pieces of art work in blender I was wondering if I could have some feed back!
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first one: 8/10 you could’ve focused on the background just a little bit more and then made it blurry
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second one: 4/10 lighting doesn’t look the best, since it seems yellowish and there’s something on the face of that head that’s unnecessary
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Nice Graphics/GFX’s/Renders.
First One
The GFX is good, however, I’d recommend matching a higher-quality piece of clothing, so in that way it will come out as a better render. However, it’s pretty good.
Second One
I don’t know if you are trying do a face render, however that spark on the face seems unnecessary. If you are trying to act as if it’s a reflectance, I’d resize it at the side of the face, and make it smaller.
Great work.
I’d rate it an 8/10.
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Thanks for the feedback! I noticed that spot on the bottom but I couldn’t seem to gey rid of it
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Thanks for the feedback! It will help me a lot
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I like the background and the person you put here it was pretty cool. 8/10
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I don’t really like the background, more for like icon, not for a game though. 5/10
Description: But over all keep the great work focusing on your next arts!
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Hello it’s permitted to ask the forums to rate ur assets
7.2 Do not create topics asking users to rate your assets. Asking for feedback is fine, but asking for a rating (e.g. X out of 10) will be considered spam.
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I asked for feed back I didn’t say rate it
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Ur title said Rate my work, since then it has been changed bc u did see it was breaking a rule 
there is also people rating ur work here
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Nice work.
In the first pic, I feel like the background is too blurry. Its good that you are trying to focus the main character, but even for that the background looks too blurry.
In the second pic you can see a big yellow mark on the face. That is known as noise and it is caused during rendering. I suggest try to denoise it or use evee engine or just use cycles
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