Can someone rate my Trailer of my upcoming game

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dJUnnqv9FV0
Would You play my horror/adventure game? Also sorry for the quality that is really bad. I’ve been working on this for 1 and a half years now. I decided to take inspiration from Jim’s Computer and A Lonely Hangout Game. I would also like some tips and ideas, thanks.

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also it will probably release in 2024

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nice but doesnt feel correct, as it looks cartoony when the scene looks cinematic. But good job

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Yea i know i wanted to make the trailer good to make a good showcase of the game

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The trailers pretty nice! I would add big text though like “ESCAPE THE PYRAMID” or “RUN FROM THE NIGHTMARES” for example, because I was pretty confused of what the point of the game was in the first part of the trailer. It is very clear though that it’s a horror game and the sound is perfect for this. Very well done in my opinion!!

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Try adding text for some context. Other than that, great job!
I like your transition and cameras movement. Good presentation of the game.

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Thanks for giving me tips, now i need some ideas because i ran out of them…(Anything that i can put ingame)

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