Can you guys provide feedback on my tutorial for my game?

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#1

I made a tutorial for a sandbox RPG game. The tutorial happens after going through the cutscene and creating a character:

https://www.roblox.com/games/7424344359/WOB-A-World-Reborn-Prototype

Could you guys provide any suggestions based on the tutorial? Like whether some parts is too hard, etc.

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#2

This is really cool. I played a little myself, and I love the storyline. The tutorial is fine, although I recommend making running shift instead of alt as most pc players are just used to it being that way. Otherwise, it’s perfect!

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#3

I got stuck on the “alt to run” and green ramp. It seemed like the running did not kick in right away and I dropped from the ramp a few times, then gave up.

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#4

i think it was good. i prefer problem-solution tutorials over text-dump ones.