Can you rate the models I made

ylafie · October 17, 2021, 7:46am

Hello. I’m playing Roblox since 2016 and I’m modeling for over 6 months. (It’s been more than a year since I started modeling but I took a long break due to school etc.) Although I’m an experienced modeler, I still need to ask for suggestions here.

Japanese Beverage Models

Japanese Food Models

Death Note Light Yagami's room

I’m not especially a builder. But I also love building. So I sometimes build things related to animes.

Classroom on Toradora Anime

As I said, I’m not especially a builder. But I sometimes build things related to animes.

Eva Countdown thing on Evangelion Anime

Okay. That’s all. Thank you for reading
I’m currently not working for anybody due to school.

SkyWarrior805 · October 17, 2021, 8:25am

The walls could use some decorations. If it were me, I would add school-related stuff (obviously) such as calendars, pinned images, posters, class subject related stuff, possible easter-egg references (preferably ones that tell an untold story/ historical event). Other than that, good job.

ylafie · October 17, 2021, 8:56am

Well, thanks for your suggestion. That one was a showcase game about Toradora Anime. So I tried to make the replica as accurate as I could.
edit: And that’s why I didn’t add any extra thing.

The classroom shown in the anime

ibse21 · October 17, 2021, 10:08am

as a experienced modeler myself i think this is pretty good maybe add something like a ribbon around the beverage models or something but looks fire (

ylafie · October 17, 2021, 10:10am

Thank you for your suggestion dude

FlurriYT · October 17, 2021, 11:37am

These look amazing, you can tell there was a lot effort put in to them. Keep up the great work!

ltzRayy · October 17, 2021, 1:14pm

I actually love those creators who create the stuff that are in anime. I really love them and your models are amazing. Good Job!

Crowdsicle · October 20, 2021, 8:33pm

Those models look Great, keep it up. Nothing has come to mind that needs to be improved that hasn’t already been addressed.

ylafie · April 15, 2022, 11:39pm

Update:

I’m still improving my modeling skills and making changes on my models.

Here are some examples:

That’s the current version of the classroom thing that I mentioned on the main post.
I think It looks way different and looks more like a classroom right now. lol.
It’s also wayyyyy more accurate and has more similarities to the original one. (The anime version)

And I decided to learn more programming aswell.
Then I mixed the scripting and the modeling duo to reach the best result.

Functioning sliding doors

Yeah. That’s it. Just wanted to write those here. If you have any suggestions or something, you can write them as a reply. Thank you for reading.
-ylafie