Thoughts on this? Anything I need to change? I am selling it, so i’ll change the text for the buyer. (ItsJet#4661)
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This is great, you have real. Potential, I feel!!
The lighting is perfect!
Keep up the great work my fellow Robloxain!!!
Looks incredible! I don’t really have much to say other than that, looks awesome.
The text is off… It weirdly sticks out
Looks great! However, the text is a little off.
The cone to the lower left is clipping through the floor and the hand on the person should be placed on the hand guard.
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Very basic at the moment, but you will get better. Keep it up
Watermark it. People are going to steal this.
Make the character a bit bigger, then perfect.
the legs are too stiff, the background doesn’t have snow, there should be more volumetrics lighting cus of the snow, and this:
just looks weird.
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Looks great! The lighting looks good and love the text with the flags! 
I should probably, yea. I have my name up top though.
its smoke… not snow… and the background are the stars of the night sky.
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Thank you for the support! I will forge onward.
Your eyes catch way to much stuff, lol. Alright, i’ll get to it.
but still he needs that volumetric lighting
add an Canadian flag on the buildings and not just the text.