Cartoon Train Model

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#1

Hello everyone!

If you could, please give me some feedback on a low-poly train I just built. I have only asked one person for feedback so far.

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God bless you all!

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#2

It’s not bad.
It solidly conveys the notion of a “train”, and would fit in well with a game focused more towards a very young audience.

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#3

Quite good really. I’m sure there’s an audience out there somewhere that would enjoy simplistic designs like this.

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#4

Pretty nice low-poly train,

This would probably fit in with a game that is designed for young players.
Though maybe you could add more carts to the back to give it the real look of a simple designed train.

Best of luck.

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#5

Correct me if I’m wrong, but I think low poly means it isn’t round, so round surfaces wouldn’t be considered low poly. Nice build, though :wink:

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#6

Hey There! A Low-Poly build consists of Polygons, and usually doesn’t have round surfaces. The train looks like it would be considered a ‘cartoon’ build, rather than Low-Poly. It looks quite nice though. It appears to be targeted toward a younger audience as a toy, very creative!

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#7

Actually, not everything has to be a flat surface for it to be considered low-poly! It’s more “low detail” in the actual asset, and the fact it uses a low amount of triangles! So it can be round/smooth and still be considered low-poly!

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#8

It’s ok, I would add some carriages on the back on the train and maybe different colour choices.

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#9

I would still call it cartoony, because it doesn’t have that low poly feel. Unless that’s just me.

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#10

What colors would you change, and on what parts?

#11

I would add a f :grinning:ce to the train. It looks too plain for kids to enjoy.

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