So this is a cartoony house I decided to create as practice to better my skills at building. It definitely sucks and I think it needs a bit more detail, and I’m not sure what to add.
I beveled a few parts like the roof and those little brick things on the walls, but I’m not sure how to do the wedges or the door.
Also this is a problem at the edge of the two roof pieces that connect.
Also a while ago I made these houses which weren’t cartoony: The Village - Roblox
You can check it out and give feedback on those too.
I think it needs more details and the proportion doesn’t look quite right to me.
The simplicity of the door and house shape reminds me of a dog house.
So, maybe add a chimney, or since its so tall, some upstairs windows, side windows. (or otherwise make the house shorter or smaller with bigger window?
Should I make the main part a bit less wide or taller?
It does kind of remind me of a dog house. I think I’ll mess around with the colors as it looks like the kohl’s admin house. What could I change with the door?
I think it should need more windows not just on the front. I suggest you don’t make the window part neon, I’d rather make the door part white and neon and the window part Blue and just smooth plastic. Also, you could add a chimney and more decorations for the exterior.
I tried fixing that one edge on the roof and here is what I got:
This is my first attempt at this which is why it is not that good. Is there a simple way to make it rounded and not like this:
You might be noticing something different with the door. I did, in fact, round the edges using blender.
It’s not perfect like the roof edge. I think there will be one last iteration before I move on to another build.
