not really much of a difference but i decided i wanted to change it to a more cartoony style. i also decided to make it like meepcity where you just walk into the door and you teleport to the hospital. it was originally gonna be an airport but i decided to make it into a hospital. you can share your thoughts if it looked better in the original version or in the more cartoony version i made. and yes, the trees look like the most terrible thing ever spawned into roblox. but, i’ll fix that later. also this wont be the actual hospital game but more just the spawn area where you walk in instead. just wanted to know what your thoughts are on the update and if you think it sucks, ill allow you to say that because it sorta does. all the modeling was made by me i made the hospital stuff yesterday and i just recently made the trees and the mountain background as well. did not have time to change the mountains material but ill do that right away (update: lol sorry for the bright image it does not actually look like that in game. also the reason its bad is because this is the first game im making that i am taking longer then 10 minutes to make)
The trees should be changed. It doesn’t make since to have perfectly good green trees to the side and have weird shaped looking trees in the front of the hospital. The windows are very bright . I’m assuming you used neon. Yeah. It’s too bright and might hurt people’s eyes/ everything else is good. But the windows/neon parts, and trees don’t make sense.
yeah your right the middle part is really wide. i did that because the part for the cross was not going in the middle of the other part. i’ll fix that immediately!
I really like seeing the progress you’ve made. I tend to rework my builds a lot and so sometimes I forget how much I’ve changed a build and it feels like I haven’t made any progress. This is a cool way to keep track of that progress.
I do think the window are a bit bright. If you wanted to use the spheres for your trees out front (I personally don’t mind that asthetic) I would maybe suggest using a few more spheres but of different sizes to give a bit more variation and to make it appear a bit more tree like. Maybe?
yeah the picture make everything seem A lot brighter then it actually is but it still is pretty bright so i will change that! also ill change the trees design from spheres to wedges like how games like bailbreak do it also! ill send updates on the this when im finished with the reworking on it
I think you could improve the trees quite a lot, right now all the spheres its made up of are the same size. If you were to make them have more varied sizes, it could go a long way. Also, the neon windows seem a bit bright, try using Smooth Plastic and see how that looks.
lol i have never seen one game that makes trees out of circles. idek if they use wedges lol but i think any shape would be better then just circles. except the cylinder of course
oh yeah i will! this is just the spawn area of the hospital and the real game is when you teleport to it inside. Ill try updating the game spawn area as much as i can when i have time!
