Character Art - Feedback Needed

Hello! I’ve been trying to get into digital drawing, rather than just graphic design; so I created a virtual drawing of my avatar. This is my first attempt, so constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Reference image:
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My work:

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I like it, but I do see some conflicting elements, like the fade on some parts and no fade on others. I would focus on making it less true to like and more of maintaining a style.

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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll take your advice to heart and try to decide on a single style.

I LOVE this but just like what Hypothetic said, I see multiple elements and style.

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Thank you! I’ll keep working on it, and try to fix the contrasting art styles.

You should add the eyes.


Otherwise, great work & keep it up! In a bit of time, you could do this as PFP commissions.

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Thanks! I tried to add the eyes but they turned out kinda weird so I left them out. I’ll definitely work on that though.

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Just curious - how long did this take?

EDIT: Made a simple PFP of it lol

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That looks great! I love the rays in the background and the curved text. As for the original creation, it took me nearly an hour - it took a while to get everything sorted out for me.

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I added effects to the rest of it, and I ended up with a version that I like. Thanks for the feedback @xXHypotheticXx, @Roboritech, and @RyloRiz!

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The gradient on the mask makes it look as if it were a real piece of cloth, great job!

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Woah! This is great for your first try at digital art! It looks very clean and nice in my opinion. I don’t really know what feedback to give. Keep up the great work!

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