Character reveal animation

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#1

i made a small animation that shows which character you are.

is there anything i could do to make it look nicer?

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#2

Please, fill in the gapā€¦

SnĆ­mka obrazovky 2023-09-08 204712
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Otherwise its decent and I would change the text style and font.

#3

ok :+1:

thanks for the feedback

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#4

Maybe, just maybe rotate the curtain a bit (in the tween), it would look like it would be swinging a bit

But else, it looks really good!

#5

As previously mentioned, the gap between the bottom and the curtains should be filled. Also, you should center the ā€œStartingā€¦ā€ text and ensure the curtains are both tweened at the same thing and both to the center, to avoid the overlap that is currently happening. Looking good so far though!

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#6

It looks pretty good as it is, but maybe you could add some effects? (Confetti, Spotlights, etc.)

#7

the ā€˜detectiveā€™ is off-center :sob: id move it a little to the left (and also add a box behind/around the word so its easier to read maybe) but other than that its cool i think

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