I have started on the lobby of my new game it is not even close to finished i would just like some feedback also you can see my progress.
Pictures are oldest to newest. First Day (Pic Of Spawn) Day Two (Pic Of Spawn) Day Three (Pic Of Spawn)
Day Four (Pic Of Spawn) Day Four (Pic Of Soon To Be Obby/Spleaf Area) Day Five (Pic Of Shop) Day 6 (Pic Of Obby) Day 6 (Pic Current Map)
So ya.
On day 1 I made the first little lobby area and I added some buildings and spawn.
On day 2 I added grass and a donation board, update board, and 2 leader boards
On day 3 I added a statue of me and messed with the lighting
On day 4 I added more buildings and an opening for the obby/spleaf area
On day 5 I added a shop
On day 6 i added an obby and also resized the doors
So that is what i have been up to i know its bad but for only 6 days it alright. More updates/sneak peaks soon.
If you want to keep the grass as the main part of the ground I would suggest adding more to the ground. You can add different paths, stepping stones, flowers, blades of grass, etc to break up the large openness that you would have otherwise.
Try to add some colour to the buildings as it looks sorta bland with it being the same colour.
If you want some recommendation for colours, I suggest following this colour wheel* and using complementary (colours on opposite side of wheel), analogous colours (right next to each other on the wheel) or using warm colours (red, orange, yellow) or cold colours (green, blue, purple) together.
Hope this helps!
it looks great but why the texture lobby looks empty… can you make more texture for the building and also you need to make lobby with good lightning, ok:+1:
but don forgets why you wanna build the lobby from first place
It is an amazing start! I believe that everything which should have been said was already said so I will try to summarise things which haven’t been pointed out yet.
It would be a wonderful idea if you increased the area of the obby and added some hard obstacles which would keep players from passing the obby and getting bored too fast.
You can colour all the building because as I see, you are trying to create a friendly environment for players so I recommend you doing this.
Creating different heights of the building would be a great idea as well. Try it out if you want.
I am just going to be honest; since if I don’t, my feedback will be useless. Do not take this the wrong way.
I am definitely doing to assume you are new builder who has just attempted to engage in building in Roblox Studio. However, you’re just not going to get anywhere with a lobby like that, even if it is an rough form of what you actually want.
The buildings, pretty self-explanatory. I walk out of my house and the houses are rectangles with the windows actually bulging out of the… whatever that material is.
The obby is rushed. It does not appear to that much effort has take place.
If you were going to go buy something would you go to this or that. I currently don’t know if you’re going for realism or cartoon but at least set your standards high enough for what you might find in an actual game.
I highly suggest, instead of quantity, to take time for quality. Your builds have no depth. No detail. It is literally parts with clashing colours forces together irregularly.
Instead of making the doors a decal, at least take the time to actually make a door.
If you were to play spleaf with some other people, would you like to play in such a small area?
Look in all the obbies there are on Roblox. Do you think people will enjoy playing your obby?
No, just no. Unless you can make a good obby in the first place, don’t even attempt to make multiple obbies.
Visually, would people think your game is well-made?
Of course, I acknowledge this is your first lobby. Just, try to look up some tutorials instead of immediately taking on a big project like an entire lobby. Being a Builder, I know that good builds take time. It will probably take me a week just to make a rough building and probably a month to make a truly good building. Then imagine building a lobby with detail.
Hi,
Wow I really like it, but it could look a lot better.
you could add more depth to you buildings and overall builds as right know the houses are just rectangles. maybe add gutters or textured meshes, because all the small details in builds satisfy everyone.
Otherwise I love it.
Keep Building!
You do realize its just a start. I understand all you said. And you just repeated what everyone else said. And if it takes a month to build a singular building idk about that.
If you are creating a lobby I would love to see the buildings have different colors such as red, green, blue, and the windows were 0.3 transparent and reflect 0.5 with the glass material, that would give the touch, but in my opinion it’s a good lobby and i like.
There’s a lot of things that you could improve on here, first of all all the buildings are the same color and the windows are all repetitive so change up the windows, add textures and color to the buildings or just add color. The obby looks bland, Bob’s shop is REALLY bright. Do some of these and I’ll say this is a great lobby.
I want to say, that I don’t like it at all, what I would like to change:
-The lobby is too blocky, not very detailed.
-Bad use of colors, as buildings. They are grey, meaning that the lobby was made fast, and showing that the developer doesnt care about the lobby. And just want to finish the final product.
-The lobby is too empty, add spheres, trampolines, etc.
