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#1

Hello! So I had this idea of a Christmas hangout countdown game. The point of it is to countdown Christmas. I think the game is pretty much done but the inside is sort of bare, I dont have any idea of what to put in it though. If anyone could join the game and let me know your thoughts that would be awesome. Im not a great builder lol.

(The outside is mostly asset packs. The inside is 50% my builds 50% asset packs)

Game Link: Christmas - Roblox

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#2

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Could make the window thinner.
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Door doesn’t open.
I would say approximately 6/10

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#3

The door is not suppose to open, when you click it its sort of like your trying to open it but its locked. Thanks for the feedback though.

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#4

Hey Alex here’s some feedback,

I like the concept of the build but there is defiantly room for improvement:

Main Points

  • The room itself is just a brown box, with premade assets thrown into it just for filler, you should look for more christmas themed rooms and experiment with different colors, textures and adding depth so the room looks much more pleasing.
    Ex. A Christmas Themed Store, Workshop etc.

  • The lighting should be fixed, and the neon light fixtures seem a bit out of place with their color and glow

  • The door is not fully connected to the wall towards the left.

  • The outside concept is nice and interesting, but the room does seem very out of place as I’d have to consider it being a commercial area (back to the Christmas shop idea)

Overall, I recommend looking for Christmas room inspiration online, and experimenting with replication and design.
Happy Building,
Sail

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#5

Wow! This is some awesome feedback! Thanks so much I will keep all of this in mind.

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#6

This is fantastic however I think you should add some key things… The door does not open and the room is quite dull, It’s really a brown box with a few furniture.

I think the lights need some improvement and the windows are quite spaced out.

I also noticed you’re not exactly using your own models to make this, Most of it is asset packs which is completely find if you’re a beginner!

Overall I really like it and it gives me a cozy vibe, Good luck!

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#7

Thanks! Yeah I would say im more of a programmer than builder. Thanks for the suggestions and ill keep them in mind!