Cinematography feedback

My Animating kind of sucks so please look at how the camera focuses and moves instead of the movement of the characters.



Please ignore the VERY low quality as I decided to record it in 480p so it didn’t take long to upload.
Let me know what you think!
Also I don’t know if Copyrighted music is allowed here so my mistake if it isn’t.

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I really like how there is JoJo music in the background. Love it.

Yup, I love Anime fight scenes so I decided to use Giornos Theme from JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure in the background

bro, how did you focus on 1 thing like that?
really appreciate if you tell me

You can add this thing called “DepthOfFieldEffect” to the camera
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It allows you to change the focus distance, it’s pretty helpful and pretty easy to learn

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I can definitely see you becoming one of the top animator youtubers. Clean animations. :ok_hand:

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Thanks! It really means a lot when people compare me in a good way to the top dogs :heart:

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The way you focused on one character and then on the next was cleverly cinematic, however, it was immensely overused. I love the second clip best because you used that slick effect, but only once.

The key is to do by that doesn’t make the watchers notice. You want to make it feel real, not repetitive and janky.

The way you went from focusing on the girl to the guy, and then zooming in to suggest power on that end was very clever.

Again, you want people to be like “Wow, that was amazing!” and the way to get that reaction is to be subtle, but creative. Don’t overuse the same effects because I couldn’t finish the first one, it set me on edge by how repetitive it was and made it look armature.

Overall, incredible work.

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