My Animating kind of sucks so please look at how the camera focuses and moves instead of the movement of the characters.
Please ignore the VERY low quality as I decided to record it in 480p so it didn’t take long to upload.
Let me know what you think!
Also I don’t know if Copyrighted music is allowed here so my mistake if it isn’t.
The way you focused on one character and then on the next was cleverly cinematic, however, it was immensely overused. I love the second clip best because you used that slick effect, but only once.
The key is to do by that doesn’t make the watchers notice. You want to make it feel real, not repetitive and janky.
The way you went from focusing on the girl to the guy, and then zooming in to suggest power on that end was very clever.
Again, you want people to be like “Wow, that was amazing!” and the way to get that reaction is to be subtle, but creative. Don’t overuse the same effects because I couldn’t finish the first one, it set me on edge by how repetitive it was and made it look armature.