Hey there 
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I’m Cj, a music producer and composer. I’ve been on and off Roblox for the past few years, but I’m trying to make a bit of a comeback in the world of video game music and sound design. I love creating magical moments in video games through audio.
I recently pulled this track from the vault, and I would love some feedback on it.
Stream The Forest Path by CJ | Listen online for free on SoundCloud
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The beginning is very peaceful and leaves me in suspense of what is yet to come. The clarinet having the melody was a very nice touch. I think the melody line works well for the feeling the piece is trying to give off.
The strings are a lovely touch as well. The flute coming in was absolutely perfection, I love the sound of that what VST is it from?
Transition at 1:15 was kind of odd having everything just drop out. I think decrescendoing there could have it feel more natural.
2:00 transition was well done with bringing back the clarinet for the first theme. I absolutely love that flute and think it fits in so well.
The piano around 2:50 seems a bit out of place as it seems much closer than everything else. Not sure if you were going for that but I think adding a bit more reverb on it could help put it back.
3:30 ending did not fit at all, at least not to me! Kind of took me out of the music though it was at the very end. Perhaps finishing with a final bongo hit or something.
Overall, I really enjoyed listening to this piece of music. I can’t wait to hear what else you may make!
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Those strings were from Spitfire Audio’s BBC Symphony Orchestra Plugin.
I can definitely hear what you mean. I wasn’t too great at mixing back when I made this track 
! Great job noticing this.
Listening to this track again, I think that I was probably in a hurry to finish this one and just went for a quick ending. It does sound kind of sudden.
Thank you so much for the constructive feedback!