Classic Roblox ads Remaster #3 (Bloxflakes)

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Hellooo! :wave: this the third creation for my ‘ads remaster’ thingy I’m doing in my free-time! Check it out and if you have some feedback tell me! @Coolsbloxian :wink:

I didn’t model the spoon

Classic

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Remaster


You can use this for your game as long as you don’t claim it as your work!

Previous work - Attorneys

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Try to make it look more commercial as if it’s really meant to be an advert!

can you explain more? I’m not trying to change a lot of stuff about them just making them a higher quality.

This looks really good. I love it! Nice job!

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Delicious,

I like the modern feel, I could imagine this on my TV, or on youtube

One thing I could recommend is that the text is kind of put together

E.g
Delicious wholesome
Plastic flakes that
. … <—
Make a perfect
Start to any morning

Nonetheless, its actually pretty nice! Good job

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Would’ve been cooler if you kept the bricks, I don’t think the flat squares look as good as the bricks.

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Yea i was having lining up the text :sweat_smile: ill try to fix that later

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