CLlP0N
(LYFER)
August 31, 2022, 7:05am
#1
Hellooo! this the third creation for my ‘ads remaster’ thingy I’m doing in my free-time! Check it out and if you have some feedback tell me! @Coolsbloxian
I didn’t model the spoon
Classic
Remaster
You can use this for your game as long as you don’t claim it as your work!
Previous work - Attorneys
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Try to make it look more commercial as if it’s really meant to be an advert!
CLlP0N
(LYFER)
August 31, 2022, 8:35am
#3
can you explain more? I’m not trying to change a lot of stuff about them just making them a higher quality.
This looks really good. I love it! Nice job!
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Delicious,
I like the modern feel, I could imagine this on my TV, or on youtube
One thing I could recommend is that the text is kind of put together
E.g
Delicious wholesome
Plastic flakes that
. … <—
Make a perfect
Start to any morning
Nonetheless, its actually pretty nice! Good job
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Would’ve been cooler if you kept the bricks, I don’t think the flat squares look as good as the bricks.
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CLlP0N
(LYFER)
August 31, 2022, 8:16pm
#7
Yea i was having lining up the text ill try to fix that later
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