Hey developers! I made this obby for Clean Up Roblox! and I would like some feedback on it!
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Looks pretty good I like the theme fits the game but the obby looks pretty generic ill play the game and check it out
I played the game the obby is pretty good it looks good I like how its enclosed and its a good use of the Roblox materials too they actually look good
maybe you could make the checkpoints more unique and add more like height variation maybe with other spots to go like in fe2
I found a bug were I would spawn under the checkpoint so maybe raise the spawns a little
but overall it looks good and is pretty good for an obby
also there were some admins and mods in my server so I told them to give you a raise
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Tested it out myself and I have to agree with IT1024, it’s a very good use of the ROBLOX materials and it does look very good. Good atmosphere as well, the obby wasn’t too difficult. I even like little details like the lava running down the sides at the start and the lamps.
I tried seeing if the checkpoint teleporting bug would happen to me, but it seems like it’s been resolved.
I also like how it was its own enclosed little area. It made it feel private and honestly relaxing. Good work!!
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Pretty good! Really the only suggestion I have is that you brighten it up a bit. Personally I think the whole map/world could use some better lighting, but if you didn’t want to do that you could always add some more artificial lighting from lamps and such. Other than that, keep up the good work bro! 
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