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Hello! Here are some tips for you:
- Center door, path, + small roof over door.
- Keep the windows the same and centered on both sides, maybe add some windows around the building, not just the front.
- Connect the cafe sign at the bottom to the left of the E.
- Add some outdoor lighting.
Let me know if you have any questions!
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As of now it doesn’t really look like a cafe. It’s giving me more of a barber shop vibe. Grey usually isn’t a colour that’s mainly used in cafes. I suggest you try to find a specific colour or theme to base your build off of (Eg. Red and wood). Especially now there are several cafe builds designed to look modern. Adding natural decor such as bushes and plants as well as more windows to make it seem more open would really help.
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I think the build looks great! Theres some things bothering me tho. The orange windows and the umbrella/roof thing above the door. Theres too many orange windows and the colors of them dont clash well with the overall colors of the build. If your looking to add more detail tho i would add some plants posters etc. One thing I would recommend for all the windows is adding a glare/reflectance. (Heres a set I use for low poly builds -https://www.roblox.com/library/2900026939/Glare-Window-Set-1)
It’s a nice low poly model, however if you’re going for that generic Low-Polyish look, I suggest keeping smaller details at a random, meaning that you shouldn’t go for a single axis alignment. You generally want to pass on some logic to the buildings as well though so make sure to keep everything to scale (lower windows either bigger or the same size of the top windows) Something like this, essentially.
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Hey!
The build looks incredible!
Though there are somethings that bother me:
1.The orange windows at the top doesn’t suit the kind of build that you are going for, since they are all pretty much jumbled in the same place. Maybe you could try making like two big ones next to each other to try to give it a better look (Also the orange frame does not suit the build).
2.Maybe you could centre the door, windows and the umbrella on top of the door.
3.On the second storey, there is a design with the little slabs and one of them is missing one which doesn’t look right. Maybe you could add another block to it.
4.Maybe you could add a better lighting and add some weather effects.
Best of luck in future development.
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Love the low-poly!
Maybe try to center the door and the path a little?
Try to connect the sign at the bottom too
If you can, change the window color to a shade of yellow to act as the interior lights maybe?
Looks nice, the texture is really good.
It looks amazing! I would’ve have kept the door centered and the bottom windows the same size