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Needing to open a website just to view what you’ve made, especially if it’s Gyazo, is relatively annoying. Please be sure to upload your images to the thread directly in the future. Better yet, switch to ShareX, since screenshots get automatically copied to your clipboard. You can then just paste them into your thread from there and it’ll upload. I do that for my images always.
Images for those who don’t want to open Gyazo (but it’ll probably be too late by the time you see this):
Overall, not bad. Shop text is a little jarring in comparison to the rest of the style you’ve adopted for the build so I urge you to revisit that part specifically. 's all from me really. Good work out there.
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I love this, it actually fits together pretty nicely. I have a few suggestions, please feel free to keep these into consideration to help improve the entire design:
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Add a bottom to the door itself, it looks like it is falling into the ground or something.
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Add lines to the sides of the building to help allow the building to ‘pop’.
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Try making the sign ‘Shop’ look much more simple and cleaner, you could try using plugins that allow you to type the word and simply adjust the settings in a few clicks.
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I’d agree with what’s previously been suggested, and ontop of that perhaps you should look at the thickness of the roof again?
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What is great about this build
- The style is great, it has a MeepCity/AdoptMe vibe to it (the lighting); I don’t know if that’s good or bad though.
What you could improve
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I’m not a big fan of the shop font, you could change it a bit.
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The door has no handle that I can see.
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The ‘shop’ rails that hold the sign are a bit intrusive to the build. You may want to add the railing of the sign directly behind it instead of it poking out to the left.
Conclusion
Apart from that. I really like it.
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