-Closed- Feedback on a Cafe

Greetings I am financieer. This is my first post so I apologize if this is incorrect. Me and @darkwolfmlgk9 previously built a cafe and recently started working on it again. We would like some feedback from you all. :blush:

After fixing it up we kind of reached a loss of ideas and we want some ideas/feedback.

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We are currently trying to go for a snow theme. So any feedback is really would be great!

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Dear Financieer:hammer:!

I love the build! Looks very nice looking good for the winter. I love how detailed this is, I just ran into a few issues. I suggest adding a few more things on the inside such as: Paintings. More tables. And more things.

1 – Un-Anchored things.
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2 – I suggest making some type of door way here. Cause it’s just going to be open otherwise, with that winter breeze might be a little cold :slight_smile:

3 – Can’t go back where the Cafe food would be to check it all out.

Other than those 3 things very nice! I hope you keep this work up, You deserve alot!

Now, I know you did not say this but im going to price it right now. I think it is worth a little under 1k right now.

Thanks for reading! – @ChristmasDeveloperYT

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Thanks a lot. We will take this into consideration!

Very cool, just only that if you could add a bit more lighting and make the darker spaces on the walls and ceiling less apparent it should be good, this could be fixed by either changing it in lighting or using spotlights pointing upwards on a dim setting.

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Alright, thank you! We will work on it.

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I like it! I would maybe try to change up the trees a little bit, (maybe add some twinkling Christmas lights to them :D) maybe add some more tables, more decoration inside, and I would also add more to the outside.

Good job on the build :smile:

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It’s good, but it’s a bit bland. You could maybe add decorations such as plants, maybe more tables, etc. As of now, I’d rate it a 7 out of 20. Nice work!

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Great! Thank you. We will definitely be adding more tables and more decorations. The lights also do sound good!

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Agreed, thank you will will be doing that.

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Wow very good, I think you could add decorations so it fills up some space.

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Well for a start the pictures are just bland with nothing on them, maybe you could add the Development teams avatars to them? Also the napkin box looks a bit too big, scaling it down just a little bit would be good. Also the circle sign when you enter should have a logo on it, hope this helps!

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Hey, Sorry for responding so late. Thanks for the help. We do not have a logo on the circle since we hope to sell it. If not we will make a logo.